Blog Archive Monday Morning Essay Tip Use the Active Voice to Enliven Your Writing

Blog Archive Monday Morning Essay Tip Use the Active Voice to Enliven Your Writing Many writers use the passive voice in their essays, but the best writers know it should be used only rarely, if ever. The passive voice puts the verb in the “wrong” place in the sentence, thereby removing the “action.” Subjects become  acted upon  rather than  performing  actions. Sentences with the passive voice typically include verb phrases such as “was” or “has been” (e.g., “it was determined,” “the project has been completed”). Consider this example of the passive voice: “The marathon was run despite my injury.” In this sentence, the verb (or action) is diminished because the writer says the marathon “was run.” A better way of describing the same activity is to use the active voice, as illustrated in this example: “I ran the marathon despite my injury.” Here are two more examples: Passive:  â€œThe contract was awarded to us.” Active:  â€œWe won the contract.” Passive:  â€œIt was decided that I would be in charge of the project.” Active:  â€œMy boss selected me to be in charge of the project.” Rememberâ€"you are the center and subject of your essays. The best way to tell your stories and explain your accomplishments is to make sure that you are the catalyst of the stories you tell. Using the active voice ensures that the admissions committee(s) will see you as an active person who makes things happen. Share ThisTweet Monday Morning Essay Tips Blog Archive Monday Morning Essay Tip Use the Active Voice to Enliven Your Writing Many writers use the passive voice in their essays, but the best writers know it should be used only rarely, if ever. The passive voice puts the verb in the “wrong” place in the sentence, thereby removing the “action.” Subjects become  acted upon  rather than  performing  actions. Sentences with the passive voice typically include verb phrases such as “was” or “has been” (e.g., “it was determined,” “the project has been completed”). Consider this example of the passive voice: “The marathon was run despite my injury.” In this sentence, the verb (or action) is diminished because the writer says the marathon “was run.” A better way of describing the same activity is to use the active voice, as illustrated in this example: “I ran the marathon despite my injury.” Here are two more examples: Passive:  â€œThe contract was awarded to us.” Active:  â€œWe won the contract.” Passive:  â€œIt was decided that I would be in charge of the project.” Active:  â€œMy boss selected me to be in charge of the project.” Rememberâ€"you are the center and subject of your essays. The best way to tell your stories and explain your accomplishments is to make sure that you are the catalyst of the stories you tell. Using the active voice ensures that the admissions committee(s) will see you as an active person who makes things happen. Share ThisTweet Monday Morning Essay Tips